The 10 Swordsman of the blood[Naruto]

[Luffy]

CHAPTER 3 is OUT!!!!!!!!!Scroll down to my post! It might be a bit sort but i didnt wanna give too much in a chapter.. :P But i might make it longer on thursday.
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This is chapter 1, sorry for it being short, i will add 4x more in chapter 2. Give me more ideas for future reference and such!.




On the day of Kyuubi's sealing, Naruto is kidnapped and left for dead in the Mist. There he will finds a group willing to raise him and eventually joins will join Four Swords of the Mist . He grows and thrives with his new family, until one day they are betrayed..


There were throngs of cheering people -civilians- surrounding the Hokage Monument on this otherwise quiet evening. They gazed at the Sandaime who was standing on the Yondaime's head. Raising his hand, the Sandaime motioned for the crowd below him to be silent. Taking a deep breath, he started speaking : "Today, on the Ninth Day since the appearance of the fox known only as the Kyuubi, we witness something thought impossible. What we have seen tonight is...the defeat of the demon, KYUUBI NO KITSUNE!-", Sarutobi, the Sandaime, paused as he watched the crowds cheer, "However, this victory at a great cost to our dear lord Hokage, the late Yondaime. This day, he has sacrificed his own life to help our village destroy the menace of Kyuubi. He has sacrificed his own soul to the Shinigami to seal Kyuubi into a newborn, named Uzumaki Naruto, who will be considered a HERO OF THIS VILLAGE!"


As the crowd cheered louder, two men stationed on guard duty looked at each other,one who is called Kakashi, the other, Jiraiya. Kakashi whispered into Jiraiya's ears, "Hey Jiraiya , I'm gonna kill that brat 'Uzumaki Naruto' tonight, while he still helpless."

"Err...why are you going around killing newborns?"

Kakashi gawked, "You heard Hokage-sama, thats not a newborn, its CLEARLY a reincarnation of the Kyuubi!"

Jiraiya's nodded sagely. Yes that made perfect sense. Not. "Wha?"

Kakashi signed, "Hokage-sama said Kyuubi was sealed into that stupid, so doesn't it make sense at the brat would be influenced by Kyuubi? He'll probably end up following in that monster's footsteps finish the job!"

Jiraiya nodded once again. "If you kill a citizen in konoha you might get a death penalty , no? I suggest we take him to the mist country/mist of blood and kill him."

" Lets both go to the room where naruto is being held at."

Kakashi was amazed. " Jiraiya your pretty smart, i thought you were just a pervert, like me "

"Keep quite kakashi, before we get caught."

"Ah..lets go..." Kakashi muttered darkly."

They looked through all the cribs and they couldnt find naruto. Jiraiya went to the last room and found him.

Jiraiya gets pissed " Where the hell did Kakashi go?! Dam that fool"

[Envisioner]

as a staring chap. its sounds good i would read more.

[Sliktor]

sounds interesting, i like it :) can't wait for next chapter

[jepray]

yeah, i like it, lets see more, its looking good.

[JDM_z3]

-Nice beginning....KeEp it up.^^

[Black Sheep]

Nice start Luffy, I hope to read more of your work.
Can't wait for the next chapter. ^^

[Luffy]

Im about to start working on chapter 2 :P

[Luffy]

CHAPTER 2 is OUT!!!!!!!!!Scroll down to my post! It might be a bit sort but i didnt wanna give too much in a chapter.. :P But i might make it longer on thursday.





I hope you enjoyed the chapter intitled Kyuubi's sealing. Please give your feedback after reading!


Jiraiya gets pissed " Where the hell did Kakashi go?! Dam that fool"

" Im right here you BAKA!" Kakashi yells.

The next morning Konoha was short one jinchurikki and two Anbu.

Jiraiya and Kakashi noticed the vegatation thinning as the air grew more humid and bodies of water appeared. They grinned, they had almost made it to the borders of the Mist country. It was Kakashi's turn to carry Naruto when they encountered a sign.

It clearly said, "Welcome to the Mist of Blood Country, If you are not a Mist-Nin go ahead and turn around and go back where you came from, Or Else."

The two anbu/gaurds were sweating as Kakashi handed the baby to jiraiya.

Kakashi stared at Jiraiya " What do we do now? he asked.

Jiraiya shook his head " I dont know!!!!!"

So Kakashi went and punted naruto into the Mist of Blood Country.

Jiraiya stared " Do you really think what you did was ok? what if konoha finds him later?!"


Kakashi was amused " No one will come looking for a little baby who has Kyuubi sealed inside him"

Jiraiya kicks kakashi! " You stupid idoit, lets get back to konoha, If they cant find us and the kid we might be in trouble!"

The two konoha anbu's had sever punishment, they did not say where naruto was located.


Stay tuned for the next chapter of ......The 10 Swordsman of the blood[Naruto]


Chapter 3 Forum Air Time:I am not sure , i might do 3 today and release it tommrow :p
While i am talking about chapters i would like u to know there will be over 20 chapters :P

[Sliktor]

So Kakashi went and punted naruto into the Mist of Blood Country.

:XD: great job!

[wolf]

the story's realy good so far i can't wait for the next chapter

[Black Sheep]

lmao he punted him. XD
Muahaha. Nice.

I'm almost curious to ask what punting a baby looks like-jk jk

You should add more feeling into it and not rush it, Luffy. ^^
Build up a scene and play through it several times in your mind whilst you type it out via internet. It'll come out beautifully.

[Luffy]

lmao he punted him. XD
Muahaha. Nice.

I'm almost curious to ask what punting a baby looks like-jk jk

You should add more feeling into it and not rush it, Luffy. ^^
Build up a scene and play through it several times in your mind whilst you type it out via internet. It'll come out beautifully.

i wanna know how punting a baby looks like :P


Ill make things slower :P
Edited:
i finished ch 3, i will post it in 3-4 hours

[Luffy]

Ch3!

Preview of last chapter intitled Ditch Naruto and face judgement :

Jiraiya kicks kakashi! " You stupid idoit, lets get back to konoha, If they cant find us and the kid we might be in trouble!"

The two konoha anbu's had sever punishment, they did not say where naruto was located.


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Chapter title:Escape from Konoha

Kakashi and Jiraiya were very pissed that they could not escape from torture until they left for a while.

Jiraiya wondered. " Why the hell did you kick naruto into the Mist of Blood ?! Now we dont even know a exact location where he might be."

Kakashi looked at Jiraiya. " Isnt it possible to can go to the Mist Country and raise naruto?"

" Sounds good, lets raise naruto i suppose. Lets not be gay ok?!"

Kakashi thought " First we need to find a way out of this place, i believe if we crack that wall a little the hole building will come down"

Jiraiya grinned " You are and will always be like that, if we do that we will get caught. We need to take those weak anbu's clothes and leave konoha and on to the mist, of course lets get out of these damn chains ."

" Now Kakashi! Grab the anbu's! "

Kakashi smiled. " Jiraiya stop kicking them, if we keep kicking them we might do the same thing we did to naruto you gay idoit."

"Lets put on the clothes now, if they happen to ask us something at the gate of konoha, we will tell them that there has been a reported trouble a little west of konoha."

"Thats a good plan!" Kakashi yelled.

Jiraiya laughed. " Everything is a good plan to you, even when you were making out with a 10 year old ninja.

" It will take a while to arrive at the gate, so lets talk about the kid naruto. How are we going to raise him? Whats his future?"

Kakashi noted. " We cant be too sure of that right now but we can think about that later, i was thinking of something like this, when he turns 15 we attack konoha."




Thank you for reading the 3rd chapter, by the 20th i will add this fanfiction to fanfiction.com, you will be able to read it better and its more organized.


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[Luffy]

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I did releize at first i said that they would kill naruto than they would raise him.. Ill fix that in this one.

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Kakashi noted. " We cant be too sure of that right now but we can think about that later, i was thinking of something like this, when he turns 15 we attack konoha."

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Jiraiya was amused. "That sounds like a real good idea, although we will act as his family, that doesnt mean we can be gay of course."

"Jiraiya, before we go to find naruto i think we should find someone that will help us. I also believe if we want to attack konoha we will need more ninja's.

"Kakashi, lets get naruto first. We can think about stuff like that after hes older, we have to plan all of his life so there wont be unnessesary mistakes."

"It was a good thing that we did not kill naruto, instead we raise him up and we get revenge on konoha."

*Kakashi and Jiraiya hurry to the Mist of Blood Country to locate naruto's body"

Kakashi wonders. " What if someone already took him from where we punted him?!"

Jiraiya says " If that happens we might be in some trouble's."

" Do you still remember where you punted him to Kakashi ?"

Kakashi thinks " No i cant,sorry. I cant even remember my own birthday anymore."

Jiraiya ..." How about we go to the sign and keep walking strait to the area where you punted him to."

"lets keep going then"

"They soon found a sign, It clearly said, "Welcome to the Mist of Blood Country, If you are not a Mist-Nin go ahead and turn around and go back where you came from, Or Else."


Kakashi yells " Dude, lets hurry we dont want to know what or else means!"

[Envisioner]

keep it up :10:

[Luffy]

Thank you for reading my fanfic. Right now i am having real life problems. I have a few injures so dont expect fanfics faster than usual. I would say maybe 2 fanfics per week or so. The fanfics will be longer than usual too. This one isnt that long but later i will make a nother one thats longer.

Last chapter preview:


"They soon found a sign, It clearly said, "Welcome to the Mist of Blood Country, If you are not a Mist-Nin go ahead and turn around and go back where you came from, Or Else."


Kakashi yells " Dude, lets hurry we dont want to know what or else means!"

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Fanfic ch 5 starts now :


Lets go than Kakashi.

1 month later.

What the hell!? where is naruto!?

How am i supposed to know Kakashi.

This is crazy, someone has tooken him already. Jiraiya ive noticed someone has been spying on us around 5 days ago, they left 2 days ago. We are done for.


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Fanfic note:Kakashi and jiraiya will appear later in the fanfic. Someone else has took naruto into care.Teh fanfic is now at the view of the person who found naruto
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Itachi Uchiha inds a little kid on the floor, as he notices a name tag that clearly says Naruto Uzumaki

Itachi quickly decides to take care of him.

Itachi goes to his house and tells Iruka of the boy hes carrying.

"Iruka i found this boy in the forest near the Mist enterance, I have a feeling people just left him to rot.

*Iruka looks at him and notices hes the one that had that nine tailed fox sealed in him.*

Itachi, " what do you say we raise this boy ? he will be a great addition to the swordsmen in 15 years."

Yea, lets do that.