first wallpaper

[shady]

this is my first wallpaper that i made so far and i wanted to use c4d in it also which made even harder on me since i havnt use c4d very much anyway let me know what you think anyway plz live feed back if you can so i can improve thanks a lot

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[GEN]

well i can tell you didn't do much but that understandable considering its your first. i can tell that you have a sense of flow with the bubbles all flowing out from her, but the c4d kinda just is oddly placed

i mean it seems you just pasted it on there and lowered its opacity a bit

[Meyrin Mai]

well i can tell you didn't do much but that understandable considering its your first. i can tell that you have a sense of flow with the bubbles all flowing out from her, but the c4d kinda just is oddly placed

i mean it seems you just pasted it on there and lowered its opacity a bit

like what he said look like you past it on...

But looks ok ^^

[shady]

ya my c4d skills are really poor before this wallpaper i only have 2 sigs with c4d so i havnt learn to much about them yet

[crimsonblood]

i agree with GEN.

[assasinekiss]

I think the colors do really suit the render. and how the c4d is positioned as if the girl is coming out^^

but what about that border? :P reminds me of your sigs :P

[Alucard]

well it's good for your first wallpaper :D

my first wall was way worse than this :(

[sparkle]

the background is nice, but I wouldn't add a border to it since it's a wallpaper. And i think you should change the text. i would say to add some more brush effects but that might be too much.