my drawing

[misakakaori]

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The drawing is like dream or fantasy...sumthing like that. The sky is like Bleach...a crack in the sky...its not human...its not a bat either...wearing white rob..got bat wing...wanted to fly..but the torn r tied to it...wearing a mask...a hand is trying to reach sumthing...

[MMao]

it takes me 2 mins 2 realize wat iz it............and tiz what I say 4 the 1st time I zoom it "WTF!!"

u want me 2 hold back or give all my commentz???

[ElderKain]

I think it looks nice, but it would look a whole lot better if it was Scanned on a Scanner, rather than a Digital Camera ^.^

It's got a nice Mystical Fantasy look to it
I love the way u draw ur demon wings and thw way the cloak like dress flows out like the wind is flowing ^.^

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[MMao]

correct, it looks nice but................it likes there's something missin........to makes it very creepy.......

[misakakaori]

it takes me 2 mins 2 realize wat iz it............and tiz what I say 4 the 1st time I zoom it "WTF!!"

u want me 2 hold back or give all my commentz???

Don't hold back...juz give all ur comment...by that way..I can only improve my drawing...

[MMao]

nahhhh.......I already forget what I want 2 say.........
naw tat I look again at it........I see tat u want 2 make another hollow lolz

kk......the crackin itself more like a shadow from distance tree
for the thorns, itz like a whip, a bit borin, try play with shapes......some thorns big, some small, etc....also Y all the thorns damn long???
and it doesn't look want to fly on my eyes, more like that it sayin "hey!! looks tat, itz ufo lolz!!!" maybe becoz it wear a mask so I think like tat.......but if I want to make image tat it wants to reach 4 somethin, I'll make both of the hands up
1 more thing......u say itz not human, but Y it has the shape of human??? my suggestion, make the cloth fly all over the body so no1 can see waht iz the body shape looks like

1 more question.......how long have u draw??? are u a pro or juz start 2 draw all of sudden???

tatz it 4 naw, I'm no expert but I juz say waht I think, so dun be mad plzzz


EDIT : I once draw somethin like you, the difference is I usin a thin muscular man's body, and this is what it looks like :
head : wearin a black raven mask
body : wearin scattered and bloody black coat
arms and leg : damn long but still in human proportion and shape, I only add some eagle claws
wing : on the back made from human fingers
pose : stand up, 3/4 view, right hand in front of the chest, holdin spiked human heart
BG : several human hands nad hell-like BG
theme : god of death

[Shinozaki]

it looks nice and neat, but i cant see wat really i see.... get it?? i dunno wat on earth u drew...

[aliensama]

i dunno wat on earth u drew...
every artist nightmare is what he can't project on his/her work.

anyway like the above quote, i can't really tell. All i see are thorns, one "something" girl is suppose, is standing on the right side of the page. roughly thats all. To me it's kind of messy as you tried to use up all the space you could get.reduce the thorns and try to get it scanned, visibility is kind of bad.