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flashoflight
10-28-2007, 10:38 AM
Hi everyone. This will be my first post in this section and here it is
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Please leave your comments and critics thanks. By the way notice the odd angle of the legs XD?
PS: First time uploading a pic to photobucket lol
since u give permission 2 give critics, then I won't hesitating anymore
1. what is ur drawing type?? super deformed? semi SD? coz the face is a bit awkward.....my suggestion, erase the nose/make the nose smaller if u want 2 make it semi-SD
2. move the right foot direction to the left, that way it won't look funny
3. I really confused whether ur character is boy/girl?????
flashoflight
10-28-2007, 11:36 AM
1. what is ur drawing type?? super deformed? semi SD? coz the face is a bit awkward.....my suggestion, erase the nose/make the nose smaller if u want 2 make it semi-SD
Well.... I didn't plan to draw a semi-SD or a SD at all at the beginning. Only while drawing it I've suddenly decided to draw a semi-SD so that is how it turned up.
2. move the right foot direction to the left, that way it won't look funny
How did I not notice that XD.
3. I really confused whether ur character is boy/girl?????
She's a girl. You know like Jayle from Valkyrie Profile. [out of topic but....do you think its hard to differentiate the girls and boys in Gundam00?]
Thanks for you advice man.
Zechti
10-28-2007, 03:01 PM
i think its gud - there are a few bits that dont look right but they have been addressed.
is this ur first drawing, or have you done others?
i like the style it just needs a little fine tunung to get things a little more accurate.
but its a gud try. keep up the good work
and remember practise makes perfect!
xx
=3
wanna see ur other drawin lolz, remind me of my past:41:
here's the result 4 waht I draw looooooong ago
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u can use it 4 reference lolz, yea itz not too good I know.........
juz ask if u want more advice
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Shinozaki
10-31-2007, 04:44 AM
it looks neat.. just keep practice more and ur drawing will get better
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