[Blac Haze]

I'll be posting my lyrics and poems here, you can take a
look at them and comment > that would be cool.

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Heavens closed the door
Steadily drifting away like boat n shore
Organized misery instilled in me
Told by the Devil in the mirror
I'm scared, at night I can't sleep
Patiently believing we're the dyin' breed
The world moves rapidly
and it would rather pass by
Clouds often hang low
New beginning on the table
Wonder where the days went
I'm sinking low I'm in hell
Its probably just depression
Passing turns asking questions

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[daniel2]

I've noticed all your poems are like mine. They don't rhyme. However my excellent ones do.
Another thing I find with all of your poems or lyrics they don't make any sense and they change subject far too often.
However when I started writing poetry I found it hard to keep the subject and not wander from it. Never had a problem with my poems not making sense though.

[Blac Haze]

That's what I do I make random ones move from shoulder to shoulder
and I don't brag thanks for it though It makes me better ;)

Here's a lyric I made right now, live it, listen.


Nobody understands what I'm about

Deep into the back streets
Livin' dirty, slangin' with the G's in tha back seat
Voices hatin' on us, waitin' on us
I got these backstabbers talkin' in my face
about some shit that never took place
Late night blazin' blunts, fiends crawl out for cocaine
in the hood you'll die before you go broke man