Annoying Art Thread

yesterday · 08-30-2008, 11:42 AM

Hey there ^^

Just wanted to show you guys some of my work, do you have any tips to make this better? I would like some hard critque ^^

Spoiler!

Hope you enjoyed it...will post more later ^^

marchosias · 08-30-2008, 12:18 PM

pretty good. proportions could use just a bit of work but the texturing you've done is real nice. i like all those floral patters.

oh, also the last guy has an extra dip in his forehead towards the top that shouldn't be their, unless that was an intentional part of the character design. and watch you're perspective with floors, the tiles seem to have almost random vanishing points, unless that was intentional as well.

nice clean work overall tho, looks good.

toadvine · 08-30-2008, 12:35 PM

Marco stole all my criticism - the perspective on the background really could use some work, but a quick look on the internet for one and two-point perspective tutorials should solve that for you in about an afternoon.

More than the textures and patterns I like how you've gotten the flow of their clothing down, though you seem to have a tendency to cram their shirts right up their armpits (which would be kinda uncomforatble) so maybe a bit lighter on the wrinkles around there.

Still impressive work - I've seen worse in professional mangas

mXX · 08-30-2008, 02:26 PM

OMG!!
want to learn me that?!!

guess that says enough, not?
well seriously wanna learn it to me :)

aca85 · 08-30-2008, 05:44 PM

Some nice art you got there... got a DA account ? ...

yesterday · 08-31-2008, 11:29 PM

Posting some older stuff cuz I don't have tyme to draw - -' I currently have 3 projects and my entry to MIMC so, I'm buzy up the ass

lol Enjoi!

Spoiler!

Originally Posted by marchosias

pretty good. proportions could use just a bit of work but the texturing you've done is real nice. i like all those floral patters.

oh, also the last guy has an extra dip in his forehead towards the top that shouldn't be their, unless that was an intentional part of the character design. and watch you're perspective with floors, the tiles seem to have almost random vanishing points, unless that was intentional as well.

nice clean work overall tho, looks good.

Unintentional, lol! I really need to get drawing guys more...- -'

Vanishing points are another issue i have.
^^ thanks for your advice!

Originally Posted by toadvine

Marco stole all my criticism - the perspective on the background really could use some work, but a quick look on the internet for one and two-point perspective tutorials should solve that for you in about an afternoon.

More than the textures and patterns I like how you've gotten the flow of their clothing down, though you seem to have a tendency to cram their shirts right up their armpits (which would be kinda uncomforatble) so maybe a bit lighter on the wrinkles around there.

Still impressive work - I've seen worse in professional mangas

I have alot of problems with clothes, I've been trying to get better at it.

The backrounds are another weak point of mine

Thanks so much for your crit!

Originally Posted by mXX

OMG!!
want to learn me that?!!

guess that says enough, not?
well seriously wanna learn it to me :)

Just keep drawing and look at art outside of manga! ^^

Originally Posted by aca85

Some nice art you got there... got a DA account ? ...

I'll be opening a new account, mainly cuz my current account is a mess, lol! I'll give you guys a link later ^^

yesterday · 09-02-2008, 02:33 PM

Spoiler!

toadvine · 09-02-2008, 03:12 PM

Originally Posted by yesterday

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Beautifully nice linework, but holy inconsistent shadows, batman! From the top-left of the drawing it looks like the light source is further to the top-left, but other than the shadow of her right arm you don't have any shading on the mid-right of her body and her left leg looks like it's got a light source coming from the top right :S

It's a good to softly mark on your drawing where the light's coming from so you don't forget and keep it consistent (then you can erase it later when it's all done)

yesterday · 09-20-2008, 07:59 PM

Originally Posted by toadvine

Beautifully nice linework, but holy inconsistent shadows, batman! From the top-left of the drawing it looks like the light source is further to the top-left, but other than the shadow of her right arm you don't have any shading on the mid-right of her body and her left leg looks like it's got a light source coming from the top right :S

It's a good to softly mark on your drawing where the light's coming from so you don't forget and keep it consistent (then you can erase it later when it's all done)

thank you kind sir, I'll get on it ^^

Spoiler!

Vuki · 09-25-2008, 02:29 AM

You artwork has such dark emotion to it. I love the concept and yet it all seems to similar - as if derived from your... AVATAR! AHHHHHHHH!!!!! RUN!

anyways... great work!!!

08-30-2008, 11:42 AM	#1 (permalink)
yesterday Ifrit Posts: 56 Join Date: Aug 2008 Gender : Location: The kingdom of Impunity and Corruption	.:The Eternal Dream of sound:. Hey there ^^ Just wanted to show you guys some of my work, do you have any tips to make this better? I would like some hard critque ^^ Spoiler! Spoiler! Spoiler! Spoiler! Spoiler! Spoiler! Hope you enjoyed it...will post more later ^^ Last edited by yesterday; 10-06-2009 at 08:31 PM.

08-30-2008, 12:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
marchosias Valefor Posts: 1,053 Join Date: Jun 2008 Total Awards: 2	Re: Annoying Art Thread pretty good. proportions could use just a bit of work but the texturing you've done is real nice. i like all those floral patters. oh, also the last guy has an extra dip in his forehead towards the top that shouldn't be their, unless that was an intentional part of the character design. and watch you're perspective with floors, the tiles seem to have almost random vanishing points, unless that was intentional as well. nice clean work overall tho, looks good.

08-30-2008, 12:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
toadvine Seleçao Posts: 3,969 Join Date: Feb 2008 Total Awards: 10	Re: Annoying Art Thread Marco stole all my criticism - the perspective on the background really could use some work, but a quick look on the internet for one and two-point perspective tutorials should solve that for you in about an afternoon. More than the textures and patterns I like how you've gotten the flow of their clothing down, though you seem to have a tendency to cram their shirts right up their armpits (which would be kinda uncomforatble) so maybe a bit lighter on the wrinkles around there. Still impressive work - I've seen worse in professional mangas Sig Tut • Drawings • Sig Vid • Sig Vid #2 TOAD'S TIPS FOR ANIMATED SIGMAKERS!

08-30-2008, 02:26 PM	#4 (permalink)
mXX Perv Posts: 2,760 Join Date: May 2008 Gender : Location: where do you think	Re: Annoying Art Thread OMG!! want to learn me that?!! guess that says enough, not? well seriously wanna learn it to me :) Spoiler! My PSP Games: http://forum.nihonomaru.com/sony-psp...psp-games.html http://forum.nihonomaru.com/sony-psp...mes-part2.html http://forum.nihonomaru.com/everythi...civilians.html

08-30-2008, 05:44 PM	#5 (permalink)
aca85 Shiva Posts: 298 Join Date: Aug 2008 Gender : Location: Hueco Mundo	Re: Annoying Art Thread Some nice art you got there... got a DA account ? ... (click on UB for link ^^)

08-31-2008, 11:29 PM	#6 (permalink)
yesterday Ifrit Posts: 56 Join Date: Aug 2008 Gender : Location: The kingdom of Impunity and Corruption	Re: Annoying Art Thread Posting some older stuff cuz I don't have tyme to draw - -' I currently have 3 projects and my entry to MIMC so, I'm buzy up the ass lol Enjoi! Spoiler! Spoiler! Spoiler! Spoiler! Originally Posted by marchosias pretty good. proportions could use just a bit of work but the texturing you've done is real nice. i like all those floral patters. oh, also the last guy has an extra dip in his forehead towards the top that shouldn't be their, unless that was an intentional part of the character design. and watch you're perspective with floors, the tiles seem to have almost random vanishing points, unless that was intentional as well. nice clean work overall tho, looks good. Unintentional, lol! I really need to get drawing guys more...- -' Vanishing points are another issue i have. ^^ thanks for your advice! Originally Posted by toadvine Marco stole all my criticism - the perspective on the background really could use some work, but a quick look on the internet for one and two-point perspective tutorials should solve that for you in about an afternoon. More than the textures and patterns I like how you've gotten the flow of their clothing down, though you seem to have a tendency to cram their shirts right up their armpits (which would be kinda uncomforatble) so maybe a bit lighter on the wrinkles around there. Still impressive work - I've seen worse in professional mangas I have alot of problems with clothes, I've been trying to get better at it. The backrounds are another weak point of mine Thanks so much for your crit! Originally Posted by mXX OMG!! want to learn me that?!! guess that says enough, not? well seriously wanna learn it to me :) Just keep drawing and look at art outside of manga! ^^ Originally Posted by aca85 Some nice art you got there... got a DA account ? ... I'll be opening a new account, mainly cuz my current account is a mess, lol! I'll give you guys a link later ^^ .:The Eternal Dream of Sound:.

09-02-2008, 02:33 PM	#7 (permalink)
yesterday Ifrit Posts: 56 Join Date: Aug 2008 Gender : Location: The kingdom of Impunity and Corruption	Re: Annoying Art Thread Spoiler! .:The Eternal Dream of Sound:.

09-02-2008, 03:12 PM	#8 (permalink)
toadvine Seleçao Posts: 3,969 Join Date: Feb 2008 Total Awards: 10	Re: Annoying Art Thread Originally Posted by yesterday Spoiler! Beautifully nice linework, but holy inconsistent shadows, batman! From the top-left of the drawing it looks like the light source is further to the top-left, but other than the shadow of her right arm you don't have any shading on the mid-right of her body and her left leg looks like it's got a light source coming from the top right :S It's a good to softly mark on your drawing where the light's coming from so you don't forget and keep it consistent (then you can erase it later when it's all done) Sig Tut • Drawings • Sig Vid • Sig Vid #2 TOAD'S TIPS FOR ANIMATED SIGMAKERS!

09-20-2008, 07:59 PM	#9 (permalink)
yesterday Ifrit Posts: 56 Join Date: Aug 2008 Gender : Location: The kingdom of Impunity and Corruption	Re: Annoying Art Thread Originally Posted by toadvine Beautifully nice linework, but holy inconsistent shadows, batman! From the top-left of the drawing it looks like the light source is further to the top-left, but other than the shadow of her right arm you don't have any shading on the mid-right of her body and her left leg looks like it's got a light source coming from the top right :S It's a good to softly mark on your drawing where the light's coming from so you don't forget and keep it consistent (then you can erase it later when it's all done) thank you kind sir, I'll get on it ^^ Spoiler! .:The Eternal Dream of Sound:.

09-25-2008, 02:29 AM	#10 (permalink)
Vuki Galaxy Renegade Posts: 3,689 Join Date: Jan 2008 Gender : Location: A Dark World Total Awards: 2	Re: Annoying Art Thread You artwork has such dark emotion to it. I love the concept and yet it all seems to similar - as if derived from your... AVATAR! AHHHHHHHH!!!!! RUN! anyways... great work!!! To the end, forever.

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