One of my drawings...

[flashoflight]

Hi everyone. This will be my first post in this section and here it is

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/d...pe/dagger1.jpg

Please leave your comments and critics thanks. By the way notice the odd angle of the legs XD?

PS: First time uploading a pic to photobucket lol

[MMao]

since u give permission 2 give critics, then I won't hesitating anymore

1. what is ur drawing type?? super deformed? semi SD? coz the face is a bit awkward.....my suggestion, erase the nose/make the nose smaller if u want 2 make it semi-SD
2. move the right foot direction to the left, that way it won't look funny
3. I really confused whether ur character is boy/girl?????

[flashoflight]

1. what is ur drawing type?? super deformed? semi SD? coz the face is a bit awkward.....my suggestion, erase the nose/make the nose smaller if u want 2 make it semi-SD

Well.... I didn't plan to draw a semi-SD or a SD at all at the beginning. Only while drawing it I've suddenly decided to draw a semi-SD so that is how it turned up.

2. move the right foot direction to the left, that way it won't look funny

How did I not notice that XD.

3. I really confused whether ur character is boy/girl?????

She's a girl. You know like Jayle from Valkyrie Profile. [out of topic but....do you think its hard to differentiate the girls and boys in Gundam00?]

Thanks for you advice man.

[Zechti]

i think its gud - there are a few bits that dont look right but they have been addressed.

is this ur first drawing, or have you done others?

i like the style it just needs a little fine tunung to get things a little more accurate.

but its a gud try. keep up the good work

and remember practise makes perfect!

xx

=3

[MMao]

wanna see ur other drawin lolz, remind me of my past

here's the result 4 waht I draw looooooong ago

Spoiler!

u can use it 4 reference lolz, yea itz not too good I know.........
juz ask if u want more advice

[Shinozaki]

it looks neat.. just keep practice more and ur drawing will get better