Thread: Kiki's Renders! 8D [Ecchi!!]
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Old 09-25-2009, 12:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Kiki's Renders! 8D [Ecchi!!]
Some critics (I'm not complaining, just trying to help you to improve your work):
  1. It looks like you deleted the blond girl's index finger on the right side in pic #3 (yuri, blond+blue haired)
  2. #4 (neko girl) is very dirty and you missed a spot between her lower elbow and her body
  3. #5 (girl with hat and turquoise stockings)'s butt looks a bit edgy ;)
  4. #8 (loli with brown hair) is very dirty too

The rest looks fine


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