[Zechti]

to be honest with you, you do need more practise, the shape of the face needs work.

try using a different softness of pencil, try using a softer pencil, and soften thos hard lines for example the last pic. theres not much depth or shading.

i think in terms of detail, your getting things ok, it's just the quality of your lines, and the shading. theres no depth in the eyes, but it all needs practise.

its nice when you havent tried something before, and you do surprise yourself with what youve done, you think i actually did that and at least it resembles something lol.. at least thats what i thought when i first started drawing.

just keep it up, do a bit more sketching and shading, try a few observational drawings that could help the tone.

:D